Please post all written poems here to see what people think about them. DO NOT request in this topic. If you do I will delete your post.

Jess

Hey Everyone i MAdE this... tell me what you think! <333 Merry Christmas Everyone..

Don`t go around finding a guy. DaMn uR too YoUng hAvE fUN. GuYs just make you Miserable. DoN`t you get it.You Have Yur WhOle Life ToOo look for a guy. Soo live each day with your bestfriends,and the only reason yur suppose to b crying is that ur bestfriend made you laugh, so hard not over a gUy!

it is alright, it isn't bad, keep writin!

Blonde Bombers
My blonde bombers are the best
We're better than all the rest

We love to flirt with guys
And then straight to the mall to get the good buys

We are all so freaking funny
But we're all a bunch of hunnys

We all love to dance around
Especially when we're gettin down

I love my girls to the very end
We'll be with each other around every bend.

(I wrote this about a group of my friends and were all so close and were all blondes so we call each other the blonde bombers.lol)

this is a poem i made up.. tell me what you think and be honest you wont hurt my feelings..!!!

I love you so much, yet you dont know
all my feelings I just dont show..

Why is it I Love you and you dont love me
I just wish you could see
that me and you were ment to be

I wish i could tell you how I feel
and the love I have for you is real

I would do anything to make you smile
Even though it might be for a while

Im just a girl looking for a chance
to get that kiss at the end of the dance..

I love you so much, yet you dont know
all my feelings I just dont show..

and heres another one I made.. tell me what you think.. be honest.

I put this razor to my wrist
I cant believe I just did this
All my questions.. I have no answers to
it hurts so much and then it turns blue
Noone understands how it is in my shoes
You think you know, but you have no clue!

another one i made.. This poem is to my best guy friend that is going to a new school.. and the reason why he is going is because of football..

Since your gone, I dont know what to do
Everything I see and do reminds me of you
Now that your gone its not the same..
I hope you win your first game..!
with you it felt so right
I wiish you would just hold me through the night..
All I have left of you are the memories we share
All the tears and all the laughs no one can quite compare...
-I Miss You-

that one is like super good!lol.

soo cute! keep posting!

wow that one was really good i liked it a lot keep posting them

Here's one:

Forgiveness doesn't erase the memory.... So can I be your enemy?

Those are crazzlie good keep it u^p


Here are some tell me if there good or not... go for it tell me the truth because I need some info if there bad so I can get beter (:

Bff how ever should it last
Bff all of us have memories in our past
Bff Then one day it clicked me
Bff I got kicked out of the three
so BFF memories in the past
Bff I thought it would alwas last



Our parents thought *It will last forever*
Our Friends thought *We were alwas together*
Our siblings thought * It will never end*
You and I thought *That we should just be friends*


Some day I will come to god and say will he ever ask me to mary him...god responed and said when your ready he will... buy then I new he'll ask me when hes ready..so when he does...I no it will be true love.


Some people say that school is gay...if its so gay why do we have it? and if its so gay we probly would go to it...then I would of never met you.


Sometimes life can be a B*tch to you...But whats the Itch with out a B? CoFuZzInG HuH?


I'll come back with morre

this is about a fake friend or something like it, let me no if you like it and tell the truth!

i dont miss you, because your not the same. i miss the person you used to be. not only were you my friend but my BEST friend,we told eachother everything..now we dont even aknoladge eachother, thats ok with me because you changed i feel like i dont even no you. all those memories and inside jokes mean nothing, its not that they are forgotten only meaningless..but i dont feel bad or sorry because im not the one you changed..you changed yourself and your so called friends.

heres another one...

all those days we spent together i try to forget..i think of my self so stupid to actully be friends with you for 2 whole years. but i cant forget them because i was happy when i was around you..i felt that i had a true friend and nothing would split us apart. it was never i made you laugh or you made me laugh it was we made eachother laugh because it was as if we were one person. we were always together, we were known as the best friends. nothing could split us up untill this year your new life. i was in shock and very confussed i miss who you used to be, i can barley look at you now. last year we were always together but this year your just another snob in the hallway...

..tell me what you think PLEASE!!..

OK..... heres one i wrote about 2 years ago about my best friend.. let me kno what you think!

It wasnt supposed to turn out like this
It was supposed to be OK
I never meant to hurt you
I guess I should have known
That everything would be a mess, especially with me involved
Everything I do is wrong.
BUt why did I do it?
I wanted everything to be like it was before
I wanted everything to be OK
You have no idea how much you mean to me
You might think I dont care... but I do
Its not like I did what I did for a laugh
For if I did it wouldve had to be so funny to make me cry
Cause crying is all I want to do now
It feels like you died
And a ghost is what I see when I see you
It feels the you, you were before went away.
I know everything will turn out OK soon enuff
But the future is hard to wait for, when in the present I want to die.

I kno it sounds like it could be for a guy but its not LoL. and its not very good but let me know what you think anyways good or bad!

this isnt really a poem,.. just a quote i made.... hope you like...



she pretended she was okay,but ----
she looked over when she heard him
say 'i love you babe' and then she *``
saw her worst fear acted out right in
front of her eyes... ----> his arm was
wrapped oah-so-tightly around that~'
- o t h e r g i r l ' s w a i s t |
that`s when the tears started flowin`

this isnt really a poem,.. just a quote i made.... hope you like...



she pretended she was okay,but ----
she looked over when she heard him
say 'i love you babe' and then she *``
saw her worst fear acted out right in
front of her eyes... ----> his arm was
wrapped oah-so-tightly around that~'
- o t h e r g i r l ' s w a i s t |
that`s when the tears started flowin`

'CHANGES'

EVERYtHiNG CHANGES.
N0tHiNG StAYS tHE SAME.
itS N0 0NE's FAULt.
tHERE's N0 0NE t0 BlAME.
WE'RE ALL GR0WiNG 0LdER
ANd SL0WLY dRiFtiNG A W A Y
GR0WiNG BittER ANd H0StiLE
SAYiNG tHiNGS Y0U didNt MEAN t0 SAY.
BRUSHiNG 0FF 0NES Y0U l0VE
GLANCiNG WitH0Ut A CARE
L00KiNG iN tHE EYES 0f 0NES Y0U USEd t0 KN0W
ANd RECEiViNG A C0Ld StARE.
WiSHiNG, REGREttiNG, H0PiNG
tHAt tHiNGS W0Uld StAY tHE SAME.
PE0PLE CHANGE.
PERS0NALitiES CHANGE.
EVERYtHiNG CHANGES.
N0tHiNG StAYS tHE SAME.

'CHANGES'

EVERYtHiNG CHANGES.
N0tHiNG StAYS tHE SAME.
itS N0 0NE's FAULt.
tHERE's N0 0NE t0 BlAME.
WE'RE ALL GR0WiNG 0LdER
ANd SL0WLY dRiFtiNG A W A Y
GR0WiNG BittER ANd H0StiLE
SAYiNG tHiNGS Y0U didNt MEAN t0 SAY.
BRUSHiNG 0FF 0NES Y0U l0VE
GLANCiNG WitH0Ut A CARE
L00KiNG iN tHE EYES 0f 0NES Y0U USEd t0 KN0W
ANd RECEiViNG A C0Ld StARE.
WiSHiNG, REGREttiNG, H0PiNG
tHAt tHiNGS W0Uld StAY tHE SAME.
PE0PLE CHANGE.
PERS0NALitiES CHANGE.
EVERYtHiNG CHANGES.
N0tHiNG StAYS tHE SAME.

OOOH WOW THAT IS SO SO SO GOOD MuKaNgA

I wrap pretty ribbons
up and down my wrists,
covering the scars, that remind me to breathe,
and I shove my misery behind
a flimsy, tearstained mask
of shrieking unease,
and when their question overcomes me,
when they wonder why I’m so depressed,
I flash a broken smile
and answer that I’m not,
I simply have a gift, that lets me see the truth,
and I know,
that when you see me skipping arm in arm
with my guardian angel of the week,
you wonder, why I always force someone to take three steps back,
when they’d finally gotten two steps closer,
gotten that much closer to being burned by the flames of
my own private hell,
and as my wrists fell across the blade
time became a crimson blur,
and now I’m sitting here,
living a life of gnawing despair,
wishing more than ever I could cut it out of myself,
and I see it in your endless, haunted eyes
I can feel it in every way you look at me,
you blame yourself for every picture I’ve drawn on my wrist,
you asked me why and I played along,
spun more webs out of my pretty,
sugarcoated lies,
letting fall the tears I knew I must spill
to take this game of deception, to the next level,
to mold your crippled mind
into believing,
that every word you’d said on my behalf,
every reason you had guessed,
had come from my own, twisted mouth,
to lead you down the path
paved with another one of my little, white lies,
but, as you take off the trench coat
and hang the detective back on the wall,
I begin to unravel,
I’m falling apart,
and all that I’m asking...
is it a crime?
am I over-reacting?
I’m ripping at the seams,
and all that I question...
is this a dream?
or is it my lesson?
and for the first time, I wish you could see
all the pain that courses through my veins,
and the little girl inside me begs, that you
force her to tell you the truth,
and even though I blame you for every lie
and even though I do believe you didn’t try,
I wish I could whisper to you, my little white lie,
finally unearth the truth
about the reason why, it was crimson tears
I had to cry,
I just want to break my vow of silence
that’s lasted for so many years,
and make you understand,
that when you threw me away,
you gave birth to another little white lie...

I wrote that one...tell me what you think and plz b honest!! u wnt hurt my feelings!!

How can i trust you
You change everyday
You say you're there for me
Then just walk away

We see each other less each day
We talk less and less
You're so happy with your life
While I'm such a mess

You said we'd be friends forever
I guess it was a lie
You smile each day and laugh all night
While all i seem to do is cry

Whenever i started to cry
You'd wipe away my tears
But now you not here
To fight away my fears..

I wrote that when i was 12...so yeah probz crap but o wells

wow no its goooood!!! KeEp WrItInG

Friends forever?
Is that just a lie?
You told me you be there,
Whenever i was down,
Well now im broken,
more then down,
almost dead,
Where are you?
you stole my boyfriend,
You and him,
My only reason to live,
but now that your both gone,
right in front of my eyes,
what is there to do,
except to lie here and cry.

~So your with him all the time
thinking it's your turn to shine
just remember BFF....he was mine,
...and i thought our friendship was so fine~

-I won't be there when it's over
when you turn around....i'll already be gone-

*I know you can't see these tears
bet you can't tell my shallow fears
....and we've been friends how many years?*

-She wants to know when this will all end
& when she's gonna have a TRUE friend-

I wrote this one about this guy who I used to be best friends with..


I remember when we were Best Friends.
When we called each other just to talk.
When the stupid things made us laugh.
I remember the silly fights and the 'im mad at you's and the 'i hate you' 's.
When we said we'd love each other and we said we'd be there for each other.
When the world was at our finger tips and we wanted nothing more than to be close.
Believe me, I Remember....

hi al your peoples poems are great! this is 1 i rote bout my nana when i found out she has got cancer again-her forth time :(

why was it you that it had to pick
that stupid cancer which made you sick
couldn't it have chose some one else
even if it chose an innocent mouse

you don't deserve to go through it again
all the other times caused enough pain
cant it all just disdisappearo let us all rest from the fear

what if this time it cant b cbered
when all the other times it could and did
i could not cope with out you here
cos a life with out you i could not bare

youyou'veen there for me all my life
but with out you would just mean strife
please do get better ververyon
cos when you are, you just bloom

your bright and can light up any sky
please don't leave me, do not die
yoyou'reike a star so beautiful and bright
at the end off my tunnel you are my light

i love you nana please don't go
with out you life would be so slow
i need you to stay, so don't leave
or i wont see the point to stay and breathe

you are one of the people dear to me
and some one i've always looked up to and wanted to be
with out you storms would haunt the skies
and even days and weeks later they wont have passed by

as you may see life with out you would be such hell
the ring wouldn't even sound right on any bell
nothing would be normal, not anymore
cos you are the life in all things galore

SURROUNDEDBYLIES-omg that poem is a-m-a-z-i-n-g!!! lol i love it! but heres my poem-hope you guys like! please respond!

Dont tell me you know
Dont say you understand
Until you see through my eyes
And you can feel what Im thinking.

The feeling of imperfection
The knowledge of distrust
Not belonging to any clique
Never being let in.

Can you list your friends?
Will they be there for you?
Now tell me this
Would they die for you?

What about when you need them most.
When your world turns upside down.
And if they bail
If they cant take it
Go ahead and cry
Let it all out.

But if your lucky and they stand beside you
And help you through-
Dont tell me you know
Dont say you understand.

she bears the burden of a thousand mistakes
as she fights the urge to scream to the world
"You'll miss me when Im dead!"

Feel the burn through all the eyes,
Now that they know all your lies?
Does it hurt to be hated?
Or to know your fame faded?
How's it feel to be broken
and not to have spoken?
Hows it feel to be deserted?
Or not to be heard?
To wish that you could have said one word
that would've made it all right,
but your the one that started the fight,
and now it's your turn....
so can your feel the burn?

OMG that is so good. Do you have any more?

love is just a 4 letter word
how much does it really mean
if you say it to all these girls/guys
what does it really mean to anyone?
you can say it but it means nothing to me
it might make me have butterflies
but...
later when its all over
it means nothing to me
it can make me say it to you
but i have said it before
and thought i meant it
but then i realized
i can say it and it dont mean a thing


when i look at you
all of it comes flashing back
all of our memories
all of our convos
everythin important
ur voice rings in my head
when you came 2 c me
when you gave me the note
when you were swimmin
when i fell for you
you and your looks
that great personality
everything seemed ok in my eyes
you were perfect
and then there was the day
clouds turned grey
no sun was out
and you werent the same anymore
we were two different people . . .

he dangles there
right in front of her face
shes soo close
to touching him
to being his
to having him
but she cant
because he dangles there
right there
in front of her
untouchable
so close yet so far
she wants it soo bad
but cant have it
hes soo touchable
for some people
but not for her
because hes there
and not here with her
because he dangles with someone else...

anyone have any having to do with people being friends forever?? thankss <33

an empty carton of ice-cream
+
a pile of tear soaked tissues
+
ripped up photos of so-called friends
=
one horrible weekend


It looks better centered, but i don't know how to center it.

or ?

i really like it

been there done that its horrible isn't it?

you're supposed to be my best friend. youre not supposed to get revenge on me or backstab me. Youre not supposed to purposely hurt me. YOure not supposed to lie to me or go against me. Youre supposed to have time to me, and if you done, youre supposed to make time. Youre supposed to make me feel better, not worse, Youre supposed to tell me things will get better, even if we both know they arent. Youre not supposed to make me take your number off speed dial. Youre supposed to tell me i look pretty, not like a *beep*. Youre supposed to talk to about a fight we're in so we can fix it. Youre not supposed to take a guy from me, especially if he means more than any other guy ever did. Youre supposed to sit with me when i cry becuase of him, not tell him what i dumbass i am. Youre not suposed to choose a guy over me, even if we're 10,000 miles away from eachother. Youre not supposed to tell me he's not worth it then decide you want him. Youre fvcking supposed to be my best friend. yea..right


whos was the one to tell me
hes not worth it, hes not good enough
even though i loved him?
the same person to steal him
to tell everyone how sweet he is,
and how she wants to try a relationship with him.
that would be my best friend.
best friend. not.




^not so sure about those. ??

mirror mirror on the wall.
what would be my biggest fault?
the fact that i lost her trust.
and said it all a lie.
Im sorry. Allie.
for im about to cry.

These halls are empty without the glow of your eyes and i shiver without the warmth from your heart. Slowly i accustom to life without you. I learn to live with the pain. i turn my back and move on but never quite forget...

*Friend quotes*–Good Friend quotes

Till the day
I die we’ll always be by my side
through ups-and-downs
and all arounds
I know you will be here and
showing no fear

*Friends*-Bad Friend quotes

We had bad times
and yet we set them aside
and here we are growing apart
these days they past but why so fast?
I guess I’ll never learn
how losing you, can really BURN

There was this girl looking for a friend,
and she found more.
Thare was a boy looking for a companion...
that didnt walk on all fours

Thy ran into each other and didnt realize
the fire and passionburning in their eyes

They were so in love
they took each others breath away
They told eachother E V E R Y T H I N G
so there was nothing left to say

They expressed themselves in peom
full of I love yous and such
all their attention toward eachother
fulled their friends with jelousy and distrust

Her friends thought one night
THEY should end it all
so they thought of a planthat was evil by for.

It was the end
there was nothing left to say
they were over
but the were still in love by the way

She thinks about him
and he thinks about her
he is still in love
though he has another girl

She wishes
and prayed to above
but she didnt know
that she was still his secret love

One boy and one girl


One boy…and one girl
Two worlds about to collide
She loved him…and he loved her
But she was afraid…..

It wasn’t everyday she found the love of her life
And now 1 year later…she sobs in her pity...
It was a tragic story….of how she broke it off...
A story full of betrayal…fake friendships…and rumors….

It was that night…that everything came to and end…
But now it’s too late for her
She’s loved and lost…
And now wishes she never loved at all

He loved her….she loves him
Two worlds collided and made history
But now that one boy is with one other girl…
And that one girl…is wishing on every star for him


I miss you

It’s been almost a year
And thoughts of you still flow
My tears are still coming
But I just thought you should know
I never loved someone
Quite like I loved you
I know it’s hard to believe
But these words I speak are true
I never really loved him
But I know you love her so
I made a promise to not be like your ex
So my only choice is to let you go
But for the record
Know what they said wasn’t true
I NEVER loved or even liked him
As much as I love you
You were my everything
My life, my love, my joy
And now, because of a few so called “friends�
I’m just an old broken toy
I just want you to know that I love you
And I never wanted you to go
But I hope that she loves you
That’s all I wanted you to know

I like that one, post more. =)

ok i'm doing 2..this first one i wrote today tell me what you think:

its called: You

Alone in my room
wishing you were still mine
I look at your pictures
each and every night
that way in my reams
our life will still seem right
I guess deep down,
I'm given our love is real
I don't think I can ever
change the way that i feel
Am I holding on to dreams of yesterday?
And will this hurt stay forever?
Cause I'm still not used to having you gone.
I wish I could go back
and change where I went wrong.
I want I was over you
But I don't know quite how.
I want to tell you I love you,
But I know I can't know
Because if I did
you'd just push me away
And we'd grow farther apart
with every passing day.
So I guess I will just keep on loving you
and try to find hope
In what you say and do
I'll keep reading the notes
that I read each and everytime
I'm alone in my room
wishing you were still mine
Inside will stay bottled up
the feeling I have
along with hope
That someday you may want me too
Now that we've reached the end
I just want you to know that
I still love you,
and I'll never let you go.


this 2nd one is called:.......

The way I feel
I just know I’m in love
It’s like it was sent down
From heaven above
I will never let go
I will hang on to this love for you
Until the day
We say, “I do�
I will never hurt you
Not purposefully anyway
My love for you will never change
Not tomorrow or today
So as these days
Slowly pass on by
The ones I am not with you
You can expect me to cry
So as you look at her
And I look at you
Just remember
My love is true
You’re my everything
And that will always be the same
So keep on making me smile
Just as you say my name

************************
tell me what you think******

VERY cute!

<3,
Chelbi

Ok these are my poems... I know they arent the best but meh.

Lost in the ecstasy of love and death,
She hides her face, her mask behind the veil.
Replaying those moments of make believe,
Of fairys, rainbows, love and magic.
She's preplexed in her fears, her mind, the lies themsleves
Fighting herself, her drug, her enemy,
Shes slowly awaking.
Fearing the truth, the sleepless realism she hates.
Shes awoken, kicking, screaming... To find him there.
Looking baffled yet amused,
To see the little girl she hides inside finally coming to play.

Another one.

I listen to hear you breath,
As the wind calls your name.
My heart races as I hear your footsteps,
You tip-toe in and whisper sweet nothings-- to a motionless corpse.
You pray and wonder,
How could this be?
Why is she leaving me?
I hear your prayers and realize you care.
I struggle to cope.
Im fading.
Im dying.
Im lost. Gone. Never coming back.
All I see-- All I hear,
Is your sobs of sorrow,
Now I see that you and I are gone,
Over-- forgotten.
I did this I caused the this nightmare,
My selfishness, misbelonging,
Has caused the pain of so many tomorrows.


A break up poem about a crap relationship you want back.

You were my anti-drug.
The secret under my bed.
You hid in my mind.
You caused the pain.
The voices in my head.
Yet I want you back there-- along with the things I wish Id said.

And one about been in love

Standing at the top of the world-- Alone.
I see you,
I call you with my eyes,
You stare deep.
I whisper sweet nothings to the midnight air.
You hear my call and learn my name.
We've found each other,
Both alone on top of the world.

Random one

If I were to wake-- would you be there?
Am I dreaming or is this real?
Im not sure because Im so fake.
I play myslef.
I am a fool.
I play silly games.
Stupid love songs.
I write childish poems,
About you and me,
How perfect life could be-- Only if Ive awoken.

And my last one (promise)

Faked the smile-- perfected the strut.
Holds the tears back-- and hides her cuts.
Bruised and battered-- acting barbie doll flattered.
No one cares about the hiden-- shes locked away. Forbidden
No one pretends to care, because no one can see.
No one can hear her suicidal plea.

XD comment on them please, be truthful thanks!!!

Very cute.. I Like the last one the best

Here's a couple i made recently..

1). EVERYTHING & ANYTHING THAT'S ME--

You are my everything & anything that's me,
baby you complete me,
no matter how hard,
no matter how far,
We'll stick together..
You & me,
Is what it will be.
Cuz you are everything & anything that's me.

People say you only love once,
but that's a lie..
Because everytime i hear your voice,
I fall in love all over again.
can't wait to feel your touch,
Your face,
Your Lips,
Take my hand,
We'll make it, i swear..
Cuz you are everything & anything that's me.
& You always will be,
that's how it gonna be,
that's how We'll be,
Cuz baby,
your my favorite part of me,
I Love You!

2). --Just because we are far apart,
Doesn't mean we are far at heart,
Too many restless nights,
When i just sit there,
Thinking of you,
&Knowing your thinking of me too.

I'm wishing you were here with me,
And thinking of what we will be,
This is my dream,
When i dream about you -
An everlasting love,
That shall never fade,
In time -
That best words i'll hear are "I do",
Cuz baby, i'm in love with you.

3). --We both would have been broken,
torn in two,
But we found ourselves,
We would have been taken,
split in half,
But we found ourselves,
We would have been lonely,
without them,
But we found ourselves,
We would have been forgotten,
in a lost memory,
But we found ourselves,
& there we were...
waiting to be found,
& We found eachother.

4). --I can feel the rush,
I can sence it,
Baby your my midnight flow,
your my one thought,
my one love,

I can feel the rush,
I can sence it,
Baby your the kiss i have not yet blowed,
your my one heart,
my one word,

I can feel the rush,
I can sence it,
Baby i'm crawling to you slow,
your that one moment,
that one life time,

I can feel the rush,
I can sence it,
Just maybe i'm comming home to you.
Can you feel it too?


I know they aren't the best ...But it's just what came out...Hope you like 'em! ..Tell me how they are...thanks!

<3 Chelbi

K so dont know if it's really a friend but me and this girl have been acquaintences forever and never had a problem with each other. Over the last few weeks me and her ex who she broke up over 6 months ago have been getting really close, and yah really flirty but JUST FRIENDS, and he told me he wanted to come to grad with me jokingly so i was like sure why not. Well at a party friday night his exgf had heard that we were seeing each other came up behind me and said, "Do me a favour stay the fu** away from him bit&h" and it's sunday and we've spoke once since and he told me don't worry you're such an amazing fun girl and she's just a psycho and she won't ruin our friendship at all.. But now I heard from his best friend (which all of his guy friends hate this girl) that he's avoiding me bcuz thats what she wants right now.. and I'm just really sad because he's in an akward position and so am I but I really care about him and don't know what I should do if I should call him or what..basically does anyone have any quotes for this?

Hey Everyone i made this quote about a guyy that i like and everything so can u tell me what u think or give me some ideas on how i can make it better?!?!?

How is it when you finally get over your ex you fall right back in love with someone else? You joke around with him and laugh till you cry..but soon the feeling between you two skyrocket and your friendship becomes more serious..the joking around turns into long talks and the laughing till you cry turns into secrets that you would die over! But your clear skys soon turn to gray when you find out his feeling belong to someone else..You dont get how he doesnt see you when hes all you see!!! Your heart gets torn out stepped on and handed back to you mangled cut and brused black && blue!! People around you see how much you love him but just dont get why you waits your time on someone that just doesnt love you and never will..but you still have hope...you still talk to him and you still share secrets but the laughter dies down and the talking everyday turns into once in a great while..... you cant stand looking him in the eyes because you remeber how beautiful they are and how he looked @ you!! And the memorise of him play back in your head everyday and it tares you apart because he is your #1 but your the Shadow!!!