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Mar 21 2007, 02:29 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2 Joined: 21-March 07 Member No.: 97766 Name: PJ Gender: Female |
hey just wondering if you could tell me what you think of this.... She's crying, she's breaking, she's lying, she's faking, she's hated & taunted she's wanted & flaunted she's a puppet on a string, an angel without a wing, she's every girl you want her to be but she only wants her self esteem I'd appreciate it thnxs....p.s. i luv ur quotes!!! yeh i thought it ws rele good, i have no idea wat im doing btw bt here's somethin i wrote...its *beep* btw. Pretending and faking Secretly her heart is breaking, He pulls the strings, she jumps She misses a beat, he thumps. Lying on the floor, bleeding Mouth full of blood, pleading. A kick in the head, She feels like lead. Barely moving, he drags her out Into the rain, her consciousness she goes without. He leaves her there and drives away, Into the distance and there she will stay Forever and a day…. |
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Mar 22 2007, 10:27 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 10 Joined: 21-March 07 Member No.: 97771 Name: kris Gender: Female |
I've got my own small town band
(love What you guys are doing here. All the quotes ave great. Anyone interested in me putting in some of our lyrics? love* it all |
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Mar 23 2007, 02:53 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1 Joined: 23-March 07 From: New Zealand Member No.: 97779 Name: Ayla Gender: Female |
Hey yall im a new to this site. heres some home grown quotes (hope you dont mind me posting) yall doing a great job i really enjoyed going through and readin what yall had to say.
[size=2][font=Franklin Gothic Medium] A perfect sphere, just watch it falling, Oh watch it fall you won't see it again, Just listen (listen) hear it calling, Hear it call and understand its pain. A sliding sin, not to repeat, Just ignore it, (please), it was never there, See the crack that shows the deceit, It never was, just pretend you don't care. (both of the above are part of a song i wrote called Mortal Tears) I'm dieing inside but I can't let you go, this is my fault, my own little horror show When you say "I wont be missed so why should I stay?" I die a little more and silently pray, Coz I know I'll miss you, you just dont see, How much, oh how much you really mean to me. A wrecked car lies at the bottom of a lake, The glass is cracked and ready to break, As the dead water weakens the trembling glass, Reflections float by of the tormenting past, Darkness falls like a torrential rain, Blinding your senses to all but the pain, No ease to the suffering you feel deep inside, Fear clenches tightly to your stumbling mind. Your smothering me so just go away, I dont want you here so why do you stay? Do you think you can help me? Think you can win? Well you cant so just go, it's time to give in. I press my face against the glass, Hoping that this will be the last, Tear I mingle with the rain, The end to all, that causes me pain. I keep on smiling like it's all okay, But here I am, On my knees I pray, Send me an angel to wipe away my tears, Please God help me, are you up there? I've tried so hard just to believe, But it's only me that I decieve, It's not true, you are not here, God, I don't believe you're up there. (sorry if those last 2 offend anyone!) I feel like I'm falling ever deeper into the dark, Like a junkie with a needle in the cold winter park. Just one last fix and everything will be alright, And then I fall again, It happens every night... You're mine, my toy, are you to stupid to see? You're only a play thing, you're nothing to me, I'll make you run, I'll tear you apart, Just to reach in and devour your heart ---------------- Thats about it..all of those are home grown. dunno if thats what people are looking for. alot of them are bits and pieces out of songs/lyrics iv written. i hope yall like. |
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Mar 23 2007, 03:45 PM
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Junior ![]() Group: Member Posts: 310 Joined: 20-June 05 Member No.: 79804 Name: Darla Gender: Female |
hey guyssss :]
sorry my computer broke so i had to get a new one hooked up, blahblah so on and so forth. but im back ! only prob is my quote collection si gone :[ so my posting may be a little behind for a while. and i noticed some other girls have taken the liberty of posting on this forum, which is toottally cool. i just wanted to ask everyone that if they do have quotes to post to watch some of the morbid ones. other topics have been closed do to way depressing stuff. haah and i know the topic of this section is " OH-so-emo", but this wasnt orignally my topic and the previous poster added that all emo quotes arent suicidal and such. okayy. thanksss (IMG:http://www.aimgirl.com/talk/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) |
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Mar 24 2007, 07:50 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2 Joined: 21-March 07 Member No.: 97766 Name: PJ Gender: Female |
Hey yall im a new to this site. heres some home grown quotes (hope you dont mind me posting) yall doing a great job i really enjoyed going through and readin what yall had to say. [size=2][font=Franklin Gothic Medium] A perfect sphere, just watch it falling, Oh watch it fall you won't see it again, Just listen (listen) hear it calling, Hear it call and understand its pain. A sliding sin, not to repeat, Just ignore it, (please), it was never there, See the crack that shows the deceit, It never was, just pretend you don't care. (both of the above are part of a song i wrote called Mortal Tears) I'm dieing inside but I can't let you go, this is my fault, my own little horror show When you say "I wont be missed so why should I stay?" I die a little more and silently pray, Coz I know I'll miss you, you just dont see, How much, oh how much you really mean to me. A wrecked car lies at the bottom of a lake, The glass is cracked and ready to break, As the dead water weakens the trembling glass, Reflections float by of the tormenting past, Darkness falls like a torrential rain, Blinding your senses to all but the pain, No ease to the suffering you feel deep inside, Fear clenches tightly to your stumbling mind. Your smothering me so just go away, I dont want you here so why do you stay? Do you think you can help me? Think you can win? Well you cant so just go, it's time to give in. I press my face against the glass, Hoping that this will be the last, Tear I mingle with the rain, The end to all, that causes me pain. I keep on smiling like it's all okay, But here I am, On my knees I pray, Send me an angel to wipe away my tears, Please God help me, are you up there? I've tried so hard just to believe, But it's only me that I decieve, It's not true, you are not here, God, I don't believe you're up there. (sorry if those last 2 offend anyone!) I feel like I'm falling ever deeper into the dark, Like a junkie with a needle in the cold winter park. Just one last fix and everything will be alright, And then I fall again, It happens every night... You're mine, my toy, are you to stupid to see? You're only a play thing, you're nothing to me, I'll make you run, I'll tear you apart, Just to reach in and devour your heart ---------------- Thats about it..all of those are home grown. dunno if thats what people are looking for. alot of them are bits and pieces out of songs/lyrics iv written. i hope yall like. oki i have no idea how 2 reply as i am rele new 2 this thing so i hope i'm doing it write, i think all of those were really really good, my brother is reading this atm and is calling me an emo but i think they r all really good and i wish i culd write as good as u, keep up the good wrk and post some more!! xxxx |
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Mar 26 2007, 07:26 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1 Joined: 26-March 07 Member No.: 97807 Name: lenlen Gender: Female |
Well I'm not really emo but the quotes comfort me! I really appreciate these quotes! thx (IMG:http://www.aimgirl.com/talk/style_emoticons/default/yes.gif)
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Mar 28 2007, 07:07 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 7 Joined: 28-March 07 Member No.: 97829 Name: Renee Gender: Female |
<33333 the quotes... MORE MORE MORE..
<3 nay |
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Mar 30 2007, 07:59 AM
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Freshman ![]() Group: Member Posts: 99 Joined: 17-November 06 From: United States Member No.: 96420 Name: Alisha Gender: Female |
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Apr 1 2007, 07:28 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 10 Joined: 21-March 07 Member No.: 97771 Name: kris Gender: Female |
[font=Franklin Gothic Medium]the majority of men go to the grave with the song still in them. [/font]
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Apr 2 2007, 03:30 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1 Joined: 2-April 07 Member No.: 97877 Name: Jack Gender: Male |
what about me?
it isnt fair you just take more than you give Confused, i sit and ponder what wonderous gifts we have squandered will the ancients forgive that which we plundered As the dawn mist rises All truth shall be revealed She is dead |
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Apr 2 2007, 02:09 PM
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Junior ![]() Group: Member Posts: 297 Joined: 19-June 04 From: Illinois Member No.: 58842 |
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Apr 2 2007, 07:56 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 10 Joined: 21-March 07 Member No.: 97771 Name: kris Gender: Female |
The mass of men lead quite lives of desperation and go to the grave with the song still in them.
I'm sorry is this that part where I pretend to care. Your too far away if I cant feel your heart beat. I'll put a GUN to your head and PULL the f**king TRIGGER. We don't rebel to sell it just suits us well. Children: still filled with the naïve virtue of hope. I dare you to notice I dare you to care Disobedience, in the eyes of any who has read history, is mans original virtue. It is through disobedience and rebellion that progress has been made. The real and the fAke, just separated by attitude. The beauty of nature is Chaos. God made a syntax error Is coping even a word? |
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Apr 5 2007, 01:47 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 5 Joined: 5-March 07 Member No.: 97613 Name: Claire Gender: Female |
[font=Trebuchet Ms][size=2] you're to far away if i cant hear your heart breaking
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Apr 6 2007, 12:47 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2 Joined: 6-April 07 Member No.: 97908 Name: krysten Gender: Female |
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I have some: so this is how it feels to be insane the world looks like a movie always plays so how can hearts so young feel so much pain? You're the star & it's the scene where you let down everyone who cares. and if you ever said you missed me, then don't say you never lied. Whatever poison's in this bottle will leave me broken sore and stiff. But it's the genie at the bottom who I'm sucking at. He owes me one last wish. So here's a present to let you know I still exist. I hope the next boy that you kiss has something terribly contagious on his lips. ---brand new<3jude law and a semester abroad. Back me down from backing up Hold your breath now it's stacking up Etched with marks, but I can deal And you're the problem and you can't feel ---all american rejects<3straigjacket feeling She knew she had to be cautious, when speaking to him again, for she had her heart on the line. & with simply one wrong move, & she could surely find herself falling for that boy all over again. <33 It's hard to swallow all the things you spit out, Two front teeth and some pieces of my heart. It's hard to believe what I see when I'm living in lies, Smoke blown into my eyes makes me fall apart, fall apart Oh doctor doctor, You're a little too familiar now &&& somehow, I can still find it ironic how As school kids, we sang that this could only come from stick and stones, But we were wrong... So clean and polished in this demolished city, You're lies, they're killing me, but you know they're just too pretty & as the street lights fall and the buildings collapse, We say our last words, take our last breaths Together He writes caligraphy on my heart strings, Weaving letters through tangled bands, Tying knots with perfectly placed rhymes, &&& making me double over with love Forced heart beat and broken mirrors Flaws and faults are held so dear My reflection makes me sick The pain we feel is nothing new Prescription drugs and photographs Love loneliness and nervous laughs What you call misery through anxious eyes Is something I cant see These cuts are leaving creases Trace the scars, fit the pieces Tell your story, you don't need to say a word. Call off the cavalry, can't save a wretch like me. Clean this with kerosene. If you can't leave it be might as well make it bleed. Scalpel, sutured. Made whole again. I'd walk through hell for you, let it burn right through my shoes, these soles are useless without you. Through hell for you, let the torturing ensue... My soul is useless without you. i like simple songs with pretty words i tried poetry, but it's just no good the pages get lost, besides i'd much rather sing to you i love living life with you by my side you're a smart kid with a beautiful smile and oh god those technicolor eyes Breathe, don't you want to breathe I know that you are strong enough to handle what I need My capillaries scream, there's nothing left to feed on My body needs a reason to cross that line Will you carry me there one more time? let's find the tallest building and scream at the streets below as you turn to me and say they're not worth our spit anyway Talk us down, talk us down from this ledge As we inch even closer to our death we're showing off our talents We're good at losing balance Tonight I'm drowning in my favorite records trying to forget how every thread reminds me of the nights I spent with you Tonight I'll wait until I know you're fast asleep to poison you with memories of you and me I pray you die slowly so I can be the last thing you see Fame is filled with spoiled children They grow fat on fantasy I guess that's why I'm leaving I crave reality So goodbye Alice in Wonderland Goodbye yellow brick road There is a difference between dreaming and pretending I did not find paradise It was only a reflection of my lonely mind searching For what was missing in my life You forged my love like a weapon And turned it against me like a knife You broke my last heartstring But you opened up my eyes And in case you were wondering, you are like a sunset to me you’re all kinds of beautiful as you end my day and you sweetly retire as the stars chase you away You and I ARE such a pretty thing Smile, smile, you know you thrill me Cross your heart and hope to die You know I'd love to Her lying was like the leaves falling off the trees in the winter, constant, expected, but still saddening Bury me in a memory. Drown me with the ice water in your veins. So I'll play these records you've always hated. I'm feeling so sick and medicated. Aw come on why are you so nervous boy. My prescriptions read like ransom notes, And love letters you never wrote. Help me feel like I'm not paranoid. You scream louder than fiction And you get down on your knees And tear open your heart So I can love you and your disease I walk slower then I used to Only because I have no place to be. And you ask why I haven't talked to you ; Well maybe it's because you slowly pushed me out of your life. I'm glad you're finally noticing. i think destiny might have it out for me. cause it always seems to tease me with the best things, and then rip them away. no school book will ever teach you how to love yourself, no teacher will ever tell you how to heal your wounds, and no class can help you learn how to brush yourself off & try again. Now you decide to push me away? Don't bother; I'll walk. You just lost me forever. if i could i would shrink myself, sink through your skin to your blood cells & remove whatever makes you hurt. but i am too weak to be your cure. theres no turning back. theres nothing i can do to change your mind & im starting to wonder if this was all just a lie. please just do me a favour & look me in the eyes. tell me the truth. i promise i wont cry. today i'll crawl out of bed. i can't stand, your shadow is too heavy to lift. maybe we'll go for a ride. you said you'd take me nowhere, i said that suits me just fine. calling memories out of mind. pictures writhing deep inside. and once you've seen it's hard to hide. you wonder why you're screaming if i had just one bullet and a trigger i'd pull it shoot my cupid out of the sky break off his wings, and gouge out his eyes AND THANK HIM FOR NOTHING CUS THAT'S ALL THAT HE GAVE TO ME. your love is my heart disease. |
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Apr 7 2007, 06:11 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1 Joined: 7-April 07 Member No.: 97917 Name: Bec Gender: Female |
hey, im like new to this whole thing nd i jst like to say
omfg..ur quotes nd like msot of da quotes on dis topic r hell good...i luv them...infact as i was readin dem it reminded me of a quote i found on a site, which i luv she finally let go of her fake smile, and the tears rolled down her cheek as she whispered "i dnt wanna be me" |
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