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CheeringBabii427
post Jun 5 2005, 11:36 AM
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this isnt really a poem,.. just a quote i made.... hope you like...



she pretended she was okay,but ----
she looked over when she heard him
say 'i love you babe' and then she *``
saw her worst fear acted out right in
front of her eyes... ----> his arm was
wrapped oah-so-tightly around that~'
- o t h e r g i r l ' s w a i s t |
that`s when the tears started flowin`
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CheeringBabii427
post Jun 5 2005, 11:37 AM
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this isnt really a poem,.. just a quote i made.... hope you like...



she pretended she was okay,but ----
she looked over when she heard him
say 'i love you babe' and then she *``
saw her worst fear acted out right in
front of her eyes... ----> his arm was
wrapped oah-so-tightly around that~'
- o t h e r g i r l ' s w a i s t |
that`s when the tears started flowin`
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MuKaNGa
post Jun 15 2005, 08:56 AM
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'CHANGES'

EVERYtHiNG CHANGES.
N0tHiNG StAYS tHE SAME.
itS N0 0NE's FAULt.
tHERE's N0 0NE t0 BlAME.
WE'RE ALL GR0WiNG 0LdER
ANd SL0WLY dRiFtiNG A W A Y
GR0WiNG BittER ANd H0StiLE
SAYiNG tHiNGS Y0U didNt MEAN t0 SAY.
BRUSHiNG 0FF 0NES Y0U l0VE
GLANCiNG WitH0Ut A CARE
L00KiNG iN tHE EYES 0f 0NES Y0U USEd t0 KN0W
ANd RECEiViNG A C0Ld StARE.
WiSHiNG, REGREttiNG, H0PiNG
tHAt tHiNGS W0Uld StAY tHE SAME.
PE0PLE CHANGE.
PERS0NALitiES CHANGE.
EVERYtHiNG CHANGES.
N0tHiNG StAYS tHE SAME.
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MuKaNGa
post Jun 15 2005, 08:57 AM
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'CHANGES'

EVERYtHiNG CHANGES.
N0tHiNG StAYS tHE SAME.
itS N0 0NE's FAULt.
tHERE's N0 0NE t0 BlAME.
WE'RE ALL GR0WiNG 0LdER
ANd SL0WLY dRiFtiNG A W A Y
GR0WiNG BittER ANd H0StiLE
SAYiNG tHiNGS Y0U didNt MEAN t0 SAY.
BRUSHiNG 0FF 0NES Y0U l0VE
GLANCiNG WitH0Ut A CARE
L00KiNG iN tHE EYES 0f 0NES Y0U USEd t0 KN0W
ANd RECEiViNG A C0Ld StARE.
WiSHiNG, REGREttiNG, H0PiNG
tHAt tHiNGS W0Uld StAY tHE SAME.
PE0PLE CHANGE.
PERS0NALitiES CHANGE.
EVERYtHiNG CHANGES.
N0tHiNG StAYS tHE SAME.
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lilbrat1234561
post Jun 21 2005, 06:05 PM
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OOOH WOW THAT IS SO SO SO GOOD MuKaNgA
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surroundedbylies
post Sep 17 2005, 08:33 PM
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I wrap pretty ribbons
up and down my wrists,
covering the scars, that remind me to breathe,
and I shove my misery behind
a flimsy, tearstained mask
of shrieking unease,
and when their question overcomes me,
when they wonder why Iím so depressed,
I flash a broken smile
and answer that Iím not,
I simply have a gift, that lets me see the truth,
and I know,
that when you see me skipping arm in arm
with my guardian angel of the week,
you wonder, why I always force someone to take three steps back,
when theyíd finally gotten two steps closer,
gotten that much closer to being burned by the flames of
my own private hell,
and as my wrists fell across the blade
time became a crimson blur,
and now Iím sitting here,
living a life of gnawing despair,
wishing more than ever I could cut it out of myself,
and I see it in your endless, haunted eyes
I can feel it in every way you look at me,
you blame yourself for every picture Iíve drawn on my wrist,
you asked me why and I played along,
spun more webs out of my pretty,
sugarcoated lies,
letting fall the tears I knew I must spill
to take this game of deception, to the next level,
to mold your crippled mind
into believing,
that every word youíd said on my behalf,
every reason you had guessed,
had come from my own, twisted mouth,
to lead you down the path
paved with another one of my little, white lies,
but, as you take off the trench coat
and hang the detective back on the wall,
I begin to unravel,
Iím falling apart,
and all that Iím asking...
is it a crime?
am I over-reacting?
Iím ripping at the seams,
and all that I question...
is this a dream?
or is it my lesson?
and for the first time, I wish you could see
all the pain that courses through my veins,
and the little girl inside me begs, that you
force her to tell you the truth,
and even though I blame you for every lie
and even though I do believe you didnít try,
I wish I could whisper to you, my little white lie,
finally unearth the truth
about the reason why, it was crimson tears
I had to cry,
I just want to break my vow of silence
thatís lasted for so many years,
and make you understand,
that when you threw me away,
you gave birth to another little white lie...

I wrote that one...tell me what you think and plz b honest!! u wnt hurt my feelings!!
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ImNotOkay
post Dec 1 2005, 11:03 AM
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How can i trust you
You change everyday
You say you're there for me
Then just walk away

We see each other less each day
We talk less and less
You're so happy with your life
While I'm such a mess

You said we'd be friends forever
I guess it was a lie
You smile each day and laugh all night
While all i seem to do is cry

Whenever i started to cry
You'd wipe away my tears
But now you not here
To fight away my fears..

I wrote that when i was 12...so yeah probz crap but o wells (IMG:http://www.aimgirl.com/talk/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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lilbrat1234561
post Dec 6 2005, 09:27 PM
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wow no its goooood!!! KeEp WrItInG
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xx_lauren
post Dec 20 2005, 02:37 PM
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Friends forever?
Is that just a lie?
You told me you be there,
Whenever i was down,
Well now im broken,
more then down,
almost dead,
Where are you?
you stole my boyfriend,
You and him,
My only reason to live,
but now that your both gone,
right in front of my eyes,
what is there to do,
except to lie here and cry.
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Hollyster21
post Dec 20 2005, 03:00 PM
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~So your with him all the time
thinking it's your turn to shine
just remember BFF....he was mine,
...and i thought our friendship was so fine~

-I won't be there when it's over
when you turn around....i'll already be gone-

*I know you can't see these tears
bet you can't tell my shallow fears
....and we've been friends how many years?*

-She wants to know when this will all end
& when she's gonna have a TRUE friend-
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Pretty.In.Pink ...
post Dec 21 2005, 08:02 PM
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I wrote this one about this guy who I used to be best friends with..


I remember when we were Best Friends.
When we called each other just to talk.
When the stupid things made us laugh.
I remember the silly fights and the 'im mad at you's and the 'i hate you' 's.
When we said we'd love each other and we said we'd be there for each other.
When the world was at our finger tips and we wanted nothing more than to be close.
Believe me, I Remember....

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post Dec 22 2005, 05:38 AM
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hi al your peoples poems are great! this is 1 i rote bout my nana when i found out she has got cancer again-her forth time :(

why was it you that it had to pick
that stupid cancer which made you sick
couldn't it have chose some one else
even if it chose an innocent mouse

you don't deserve to go through it again
all the other times caused enough pain
cant it all just disdisappearo let us all rest from the fear

what if this time it cant b cbered
when all the other times it could and did
i could not cope with out you here
cos a life with out you i could not bare

youyou'veen there for me all my life
but with out you would just mean strife
please do get better ververyon
cos when you are, you just bloom

your bright and can light up any sky
please don't leave me, do not die
yoyou'reike a star so beautiful and bright
at the end off my tunnel you are my light

i love you nana please don't go
with out you life would be so slow
i need you to stay, so don't leave
or i wont see the point to stay and breathe

you are one of the people dear to me
and some one i've always looked up to and wanted to be
with out you storms would haunt the skies
and even days and weeks later they wont have passed by

as you may see life with out you would be such hell
the ring wouldn't even sound right on any bell
nothing would be normal, not anymore
cos you are the life in all things galore
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post Jan 6 2006, 10:39 PM
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SURROUNDEDBYLIES-omg that poem is a-m-a-z-i-n-g!!! lol i love it! but heres my poem-hope you guys like! please respond!

Dont tell me you know
Dont say you understand
Until you see through my eyes
And you can feel what Im thinking.

The feeling of imperfection
The knowledge of distrust
Not belonging to any clique
Never being let in.

Can you list your friends?
Will they be there for you?
Now tell me this
Would they die for you?

What about when you need them most.
When your world turns upside down.
And if they bail
If they cant take it
Go ahead and cry
Let it all out.

But if your lucky and they stand beside you
And help you through-
Dont tell me you know
Dont say you understand.
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post Jan 11 2006, 10:52 PM
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she bears the burden of a thousand mistakes
as she fights the urge to scream to the world
"You'll miss me when Im dead!"
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Hollyster21
post Jan 24 2006, 04:19 PM
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Feel the burn through all the eyes,
Now that they know all your lies?
Does it hurt to be hated?
Or to know your fame faded?
How's it feel to be broken
and not to have spoken?
Hows it feel to be deserted?
Or not to be heard?
To wish that you could have said one word
that would've made it all right,
but your the one that started the fight,
and now it's your turn....
so can your feel the burn?
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