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> Your Written Poems/quotes, YOU wrote them & ONLY here!
FallLovin
post Dec 23 2004, 04:32 PM
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Please post all written poems here to see what people think about them. DO NOT request in this topic. If you do I will delete your post.

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post Dec 24 2004, 08:36 PM
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Hey Everyone i MAdE this... tell me what you think! <333 Merry Christmas Everyone.. (IMG:http://www.aimgirl.com/talk/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Don`t go around finding a guy. DaMn uR too YoUng hAvE fUN. GuYs just make you Miserable. DoN`t you get it.You Have Yur WhOle Life ToOo look for a guy. Soo live each day with your bestfriends,and the only reason yur suppose to b crying is that ur bestfriend made you laugh, so hard not over a gUy!
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post Dec 25 2004, 05:46 PM
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it is alright, it isn't bad, keep writin!
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post Jan 23 2005, 02:35 PM
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Blonde Bombers
My blonde bombers are the best
We're better than all the rest

We love to flirt with guys
And then straight to the mall to get the good buys

We are all so freaking funny
But we're all a bunch of hunnys

We all love to dance around
Especially when we're gettin down

I love my girls to the very end
We'll be with each other around every bend.

(I wrote this about a group of my friends and were all so close and were all blondes so we call each other the blonde bombers.lol)
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post Jan 23 2005, 09:58 PM
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this is a poem i made up.. tell me what you think and be honest you wont hurt my feelings..!!!

I love you so much, yet you dont know
all my feelings I just dont show..

Why is it I Love you and you dont love me
I just wish you could see
that me and you were ment to be

I wish i could tell you how I feel
and the love I have for you is real

I would do anything to make you smile
Even though it might be for a while

Im just a girl looking for a chance
to get that kiss at the end of the dance..

I love you so much, yet you dont know
all my feelings I just dont show..
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post Jan 24 2005, 05:34 AM
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and heres another one I made.. tell me what you think.. be honest.

I put this razor to my wrist
I cant believe I just did this
All my questions.. I have no answers to
it hurts so much and then it turns blue
Noone understands how it is in my shoes
You think you know, but you have no clue!
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post Jan 24 2005, 02:42 PM
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another one i made.. This poem is to my best guy friend that is going to a new school.. and the reason why he is going is because of football..

Since your gone, I dont know what to do
Everything I see and do reminds me of you
Now that your gone its not the same..
I hope you win your first game..!
with you it felt so right
I wiish you would just hold me through the night..
All I have left of you are the memories we share
All the tears and all the laughs no one can quite compare...
-I Miss You-
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post Jan 27 2005, 03:44 PM
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that one is like super good!lol.
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post Feb 16 2005, 08:21 PM
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soo cute! keep posting!
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post Feb 18 2005, 11:57 PM
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wow that one was really good i liked it a lot keep posting them
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post Feb 19 2005, 09:49 AM
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Here's one:

Forgiveness doesn't erase the memory.... So can I be your enemy?
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post Mar 6 2005, 10:36 AM
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Those are crazzlie good keep it u^p


Here are some tell me if there good or not... go for it tell me the truth because I need some info if there bad so I can get beter (:

Bff how ever should it last
Bff all of us have memories in our past
Bff Then one day it clicked me
Bff I got kicked out of the three
so BFF memories in the past
Bff I thought it would alwas last



Our parents thought *It will last forever*
Our Friends thought *We were alwas together*
Our siblings thought * It will never end*
You and I thought *That we should just be friends*


Some day I will come to god and say will he ever ask me to mary him...god responed and said when your ready he will... buy then I new he'll ask me when hes ready..so when he does...I no it will be true love.


Some people say that school is gay...if its so gay why do we have it? and if its so gay we probly would go to it...then I would of never met you.


Sometimes life can be a B*tch to you...But whats the Itch with out a B? CoFuZzInG HuH?


I'll come back with morre
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post Apr 12 2005, 07:57 PM
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this is about a fake friend or something like it, let me no if you like it and tell the truth! (IMG:http://www.aimgirl.com/talk/style_emoticons/default/blush.gif)

i dont miss you, because your not the same. i miss the person you used to be. not only were you my friend but my BEST friend,we told eachother everything..now we dont even aknoladge eachother, thats ok with me because you changed i feel like i dont even no you. all those memories and inside jokes mean nothing, its not that they are forgotten only meaningless..but i dont feel bad or sorry because im not the one you changed..you changed yourself and your so called friends.

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post Apr 12 2005, 08:59 PM
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heres another one...

all those days we spent together i try to forget..i think of my self so stupid to actully be friends with you for 2 whole years. but i cant forget them because i was happy when i was around you..i felt that i had a true friend and nothing would split us apart. it was never i made you laugh or you made me laugh it was we made eachother laugh because it was as if we were one person. we were always together, we were known as the best friends. nothing could split us up untill this year your new life. i was in shock and very confussed i miss who you used to be, i can barley look at you now. last year we were always together but this year your just another snob in the hallway...

..tell me what you think PLEASE!!..
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post Apr 22 2005, 06:05 AM
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OK..... heres one i wrote about 2 years ago about my best friend.. let me kno what you think!

It wasnt supposed to turn out like this
It was supposed to be OK
I never meant to hurt you
I guess I should have known
That everything would be a mess, especially with me involved
Everything I do is wrong.
BUt why did I do it?
I wanted everything to be like it was before
I wanted everything to be OK
You have no idea how much you mean to me
You might think I dont care... but I do
Its not like I did what I did for a laugh
For if I did it wouldve had to be so funny to make me cry
Cause crying is all I want to do now
It feels like you died
And a ghost is what I see when I see you
It feels the you, you were before went away.
I know everything will turn out OK soon enuff
But the future is hard to wait for, when in the present I want to die.

I kno it sounds like it could be for a guy but its not LoL. and its not very good but let me know what you think anyways good or bad!
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