 Your Written Poems/quotes, YOU wrote them & ONLY here! |
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 Dec 23 2004, 04:32 PM
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LETS GET SOME MUD ON THE TiRES  Group: Member Posts: 2127 Joined: 12-July 04 From: Cali baby! Member No.: 61524 Name: Jess Gender: Female  |
Please post all written poems here to see what people think about them. DO NOT request in this topic. If you do I will delete your post.
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Dec 24 2004, 08:36 PM
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Sophomore Group: Member Posts: 121 Joined: 24-June 04 From: michigan Member No.: 59904 Name: NiC Gender: Female |
Hey Everyone i MAdE this... tell me what you think! <333 Merry Christmas Everyone.. (IMG:http://www.aimgirl.com/talk/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
Don`t go around finding a guy. DaMn uR too YoUng hAvE fUN. GuYs just make you Miserable. DoN`t you get it.You Have Yur WhOle Life ToOo look for a guy. Soo live each day with your bestfriends,and the only reason yur suppose to b crying is that ur bestfriend made you laugh, so hard not over a gUy! |
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Dec 25 2004, 05:46 PM
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Almost Cool Group: Member Posts: 39 Joined: 27-November 04 From: Chicago Member No.: 68993 Name: Donna Gender: Female |
it is alright, it isn't bad, keep writin!
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Jan 23 2005, 02:35 PM
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Sophomore Group: Member Posts: 186 Joined: 29-December 04 From: nJ Member No.: 70563 Name: jane doe Gender: Female |
Blonde Bombers
My blonde bombers are the best We're better than all the rest We love to flirt with guys And then straight to the mall to get the good buys We are all so freaking funny But we're all a bunch of hunnys We all love to dance around Especially when we're gettin down I love my girls to the very end We'll be with each other around every bend. (I wrote this about a group of my friends and were all so close and were all blondes so we call each other the blonde bombers.lol) |
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Jan 23 2005, 09:58 PM
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Junior Group: Member Posts: 312 Joined: 23-December 04 Member No.: 70270 Name: jennifer Gender: Female |
this is a poem i made up.. tell me what you think and be honest you wont hurt my feelings..!!!
I love you so much, yet you dont know all my feelings I just dont show.. Why is it I Love you and you dont love me I just wish you could see that me and you were ment to be I wish i could tell you how I feel and the love I have for you is real I would do anything to make you smile Even though it might be for a while Im just a girl looking for a chance to get that kiss at the end of the dance.. I love you so much, yet you dont know all my feelings I just dont show.. |
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Jan 24 2005, 05:34 AM
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Junior Group: Member Posts: 312 Joined: 23-December 04 Member No.: 70270 Name: jennifer Gender: Female |
and heres another one I made.. tell me what you think.. be honest.
I put this razor to my wrist I cant believe I just did this All my questions.. I have no answers to it hurts so much and then it turns blue Noone understands how it is in my shoes You think you know, but you have no clue! |
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Jan 24 2005, 02:42 PM
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Junior Group: Member Posts: 312 Joined: 23-December 04 Member No.: 70270 Name: jennifer Gender: Female |
another one i made.. This poem is to my best guy friend that is going to a new school.. and the reason why he is going is because of football..
Since your gone, I dont know what to do Everything I see and do reminds me of you Now that your gone its not the same.. I hope you win your first game..! with you it felt so right I wiish you would just hold me through the night.. All I have left of you are the memories we share All the tears and all the laughs no one can quite compare... -I Miss You- |
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Jan 27 2005, 03:44 PM
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Sophomore Group: Member Posts: 110 Joined: 9-January 05 Member No.: 71047 Name: Anna Gender: Female |
that one is like super good!lol.
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Feb 16 2005, 08:21 PM
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Freshman Group: Member Posts: 78 Joined: 28-January 05 Member No.: 71990 Name: nicole Gender: Female |
soo cute! keep posting!
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Feb 18 2005, 11:57 PM
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Almost Cool Group: Member Posts: 15 Joined: 24-June 04 From: SaN DiEgO Ca Member No.: 59800 Name: ERICA Gender: Female |
wow that one was really good i liked it a lot keep posting them
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Feb 19 2005, 09:49 AM
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Winter to your Summer Group: Member Posts: 2619 Joined: 15-April 04 From: The Edge of Dimensia Member No.: 50644 Name: Erika Gender: Female |
Here's one:
Forgiveness doesn't erase the memory.... So can I be your enemy? |
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Mar 6 2005, 10:36 AM
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Sophomore Group: Member Posts: 186 Joined: 20-November 04 Member No.: 68597 Name: Madi Gender: Female |
Those are crazzlie good keep it u^p
Here are some tell me if there good or not... go for it tell me the truth because I need some info if there bad so I can get beter (: Bff how ever should it last Bff all of us have memories in our past Bff Then one day it clicked me Bff I got kicked out of the three so BFF memories in the past Bff I thought it would alwas last Our parents thought *It will last forever* Our Friends thought *We were alwas together* Our siblings thought * It will never end* You and I thought *That we should just be friends* Some day I will come to god and say will he ever ask me to mary him...god responed and said when your ready he will... buy then I new he'll ask me when hes ready..so when he does...I no it will be true love. Some people say that school is gay...if its so gay why do we have it? and if its so gay we probly would go to it...then I would of never met you. Sometimes life can be a B*tch to you...But whats the Itch with out a B? CoFuZzInG HuH? I'll come back with morre |
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 Apr 12 2005, 07:57 PM
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Almost Cool Group: Member Posts: 46 Joined: 26-November 04 Member No.: 68940 Name: mandie Gender: Female |
this is about a fake friend or something like it, let me no if you like it and tell the truth! (IMG:http://www.aimgirl.com/talk/style_emoticons/default/blush.gif)
i dont miss you, because your not the same. i miss the person you used to be. not only were you my friend but my BEST friend,we told eachother everything..now we dont even aknoladge eachother, thats ok with me because you changed i feel like i dont even no you. all those memories and inside jokes mean nothing, its not that they are forgotten only meaningless..but i dont feel bad or sorry because im not the one you changed..you changed yourself and your so called friends. This post has been edited by IAMACHRISTIAN38: Apr 12 2005, 09:00 PM |
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Apr 12 2005, 08:59 PM
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Almost Cool Group: Member Posts: 46 Joined: 26-November 04 Member No.: 68940 Name: mandie Gender: Female |
heres another one...
all those days we spent together i try to forget..i think of my self so stupid to actully be friends with you for 2 whole years. but i cant forget them because i was happy when i was around you..i felt that i had a true friend and nothing would split us apart. it was never i made you laugh or you made me laugh it was we made eachother laugh because it was as if we were one person. we were always together, we were known as the best friends. nothing could split us up untill this year your new life. i was in shock and very confussed i miss who you used to be, i can barley look at you now. last year we were always together but this year your just another snob in the hallway... ..tell me what you think PLEASE!!.. |
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Apr 22 2005, 06:05 AM
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Freshman Group: Member Posts: 54 Joined: 17-March 05 From: *Philly* Member No.: 74515 Name: Shannon Gender: Female |
OK..... heres one i wrote about 2 years ago about my best friend.. let me kno what you think!
It wasnt supposed to turn out like this It was supposed to be OK I never meant to hurt you I guess I should have known That everything would be a mess, especially with me involved Everything I do is wrong. BUt why did I do it? I wanted everything to be like it was before I wanted everything to be OK You have no idea how much you mean to me You might think I dont care... but I do Its not like I did what I did for a laugh For if I did it wouldve had to be so funny to make me cry Cause crying is all I want to do now It feels like you died And a ghost is what I see when I see you It feels the you, you were before went away. I know everything will turn out OK soon enuff But the future is hard to wait for, when in the present I want to die. I kno it sounds like it could be for a guy but its not LoL. and its not very good but let me know what you think anyways good or bad! |
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