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Nov 21 2004, 08:56 AM
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runnin'downadream ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2280 Joined: 16-November 03 From: NewYork sweets Member No.: 25324 Name: Hey BuxBaby Gender: Female |
Post your poems that you've written or ones that you've seen! (can be on any topic... if you need a certain kind of poem- please request it in this forum!)
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Nov 26 2004, 09:47 PM
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❒ Single ❒ Taken ✔ Depends who’s asking. ![]() Group: Member Posts: 3851 Joined: 25-November 04 From: Illinois Member No.: 68887 Name: Angel. Gender: Female |
God saw you were getting tired
And a cure was not meant to be So he put his arms around you And whispered come with me With tearful eyes we watched you As we saw you pass away Although we love you deeply We could not make you stay Your golden heart stopped beating Hard working hands at rest God broke our hearts to prove to us He only takes the best |
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Nov 26 2004, 09:47 PM
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❒ Single ❒ Taken ✔ Depends who’s asking. ![]() Group: Member Posts: 3851 Joined: 25-November 04 From: Illinois Member No.: 68887 Name: Angel. Gender: Female |
If tears could build a stairway
and memories a lane i'd walk right up to Heaven and bring you home again but memories are just memories and tears are just tears and so i will miss you through the years beacuse without your smile or your laugh it's too much pain to carry on |
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Nov 26 2004, 09:48 PM
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❒ Single ❒ Taken ✔ Depends who’s asking. ![]() Group: Member Posts: 3851 Joined: 25-November 04 From: Illinois Member No.: 68887 Name: Angel. Gender: Female |
She speaks out of the silence
With her deathly sharp wordes But when she screams aloud The silence is absurd For not only I can't hear her I cannot see a face Instead of seeing menacing eyes There's just an empty space But the body attached is moving Flashing a bloody knife Red gushes out of a cut on her face As she tries to take her life But as I watch from my spot in stillness She moves the knife to her arm She slashes and cuts herself Trying to cause more harm But then she speaks to me gently "Draw the knife across my wrist. Help me! I can't do it alone! Please end my life with this." I look up and she continues "Please, why can't you see? The knife won't cause me any pain! It only hurts when I breathe..." |
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Nov 29 2004, 04:51 PM
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Almost Cool ![]() Group: Member Posts: 38 Joined: 27-August 04 From: MA Member No.: 65142 Name: Nicole Gender: Female |
finding my own words, my own little stage
my own epic drama, my own scripted page i'll send you the rough draft, i'll seal it with tears maybe you'll read it and i'll reappear from the start it was shaky and the characters rash, a nice setting for heart ache where emotions come last all i have deep inside to overcome this desire are friendly intentions and fairweather smiles |
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Dec 5 2004, 11:15 AM
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Sophomore ![]() Group: Member Posts: 186 Joined: 20-November 04 Member No.: 68597 Name: Madi Gender: Female |
those are good keep it up!
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Dec 5 2004, 11:34 AM
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Summer 'o5 ![]() Group: Member Posts: 5093 Joined: 27-June 04 From: New Mexico Member No.: 60255 Name: Lucy Gender: Female |
Hey those are great! Are there anymore?
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Dec 27 2004, 04:44 PM
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Sophomore ![]() Group: Member Posts: 161 Joined: 19-December 04 From: ..ohio* Member No.: 70015 Name: Brooke... Gender: Female |
*.I sit here and wonder if you're really into me..
Or if you just like what you see.. I'm not a stupid girl So don't play me for a fool If you think I'm just along for the ride Im not into that game I'm really beginning to like what I see in you and I'm hoping maybe you like me too.* dunno how good it is but hey I tried- =] (IMG:http://www.aimgirl.com/talk/style_emoticons/default/heart.gif) |
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Dec 28 2004, 09:27 PM
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Summer 'o5 ![]() Group: Member Posts: 5093 Joined: 27-June 04 From: New Mexico Member No.: 60255 Name: Lucy Gender: Female |
^ That's really good! Keep up the good work. (IMG:http://www.aimgirl.com/talk/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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Dec 30 2004, 09:32 AM
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We are the voices of an underground choir ![]() Group: Super Member Posts: 2606 Joined: 3-May 04 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 52613 Name: Elyssa Gender: Female |
She ran away that day
The day he said he didnt love her She never did come back Never wanted to stay With her heart So broken This day seems like its never gonna end Gonna last forever Please make my life better than this This broken heart cant take no more No more She ran away that day, Thought her life was never meant to be Loved the boy with all her heart Now this is the sad part She never found the guts to say, she loved him in every way This day seems like its never gonna end Gonna last forever Please my make my life better than this This broken heart can take no more, no more She ran away that day And she has left us, to go to a better place |
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Jan 27 2005, 06:39 PM
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Junior ![]() Group: Member Posts: 264 Joined: 23-November 04 From: the clubbbbbb ♥ Member No.: 68776 Name: muh-rii Gender: Female |
can some one make me a poem about moving up to the highschool and how we had good memories in middle school??
please try to add...... -food fight - getting lost on our first day -new friends and stuff liek that..thank u soo much |
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Jan 27 2005, 07:04 PM
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Junior ![]() Group: Member Posts: 312 Joined: 23-December 04 Member No.: 70270 Name: jennifer Gender: Female |
omg im now a freshman and i miss 8th grade so much.. so much 8th is my favorite year.. we had so many food fights.. ( i almost got suspended for one ) and on our last day of school.. when we ate lunch they put up a camera.. so they see who started it IT WAS THE BEST
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Feb 17 2005, 03:24 PM
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Junior ![]() Group: Member Posts: 324 Joined: 27-October 03 From: sT. LoUiE Member No.: 2973 Name: sAmMi Gender: Female |
HERES SOME FRIENDSHIP ONES...
We shared so much laughter, shared so many tears. We had a special friendship that grew stonger each year. We were not siblings by birth but we knew from the start, We were put together to be siblings of the Heart <3. I thought she was my best friend the best i*ve ever had, Instead I found out the truth and what i learned was sad. We still call each other friends but i feel were far apart, Through we see each other everyday, i have a broken heart. She had made new friends and i have some too, We are talking less and less and inside i*m cold and blue. Each and every night i pray that she will finally see, How much i want our friendship back and how much she means so me. When you are sad i*ll dry your tears, When you are scared i*ll ease your fears. When you are worried i*ll give you hope, If you want to give up i*ll help you rope. When your lost and can*t see the light, I*ll be your beacon shinning so bright. This is my oath that i pledge to the end, Why you may ask? Because your my (best) friend. ** best is opional ** |
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Feb 17 2005, 03:48 PM
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Junior ![]() Group: Member Posts: 324 Joined: 27-October 03 From: sT. LoUiE Member No.: 2973 Name: sAmMi Gender: Female |
AH WELL HERES SOME LOVE POEMS AND STUFF..
Kissing is a sin, Hugging is a shame, The boys do all the maufactoring, While the girls get all the blame. They say the love you, And you believe its true, But when you get a belly full, They say "The h.ell with you." One month of freedom, Can cause 9 months of pain, You think about the baby, And all about the blame. Now you heard my story, And take it from a fools advice, Don*t become a mother, until you are a wife. Practical Application He*s teaching her arithmetic he said it was his mission, He kissed her one, then kissed her twice and said, "Now thats addition." And as he added smack by smack in silent satisfaction, She sweetly gave the kissed back and said, "Now thats subtraction." Then he kissed her and she kissed him without and explanation, They both together smiled and said, "Thats multiplication." Then dad appeared upon the scene and made a quick decision, He kicked that boy 2 blocks away and said, "Thats long division." L<3vE A heart is not a plaything A heart in now a toy, But unless you want it broken Just give it to a boy. Boys love to mess around with things To see what makes then run, But when it comes to loving girls They do it just for fun. Boys never give their hearts away They play us girls for fools, They wait for us to give our love And then they play it cool. Don*t ever fall in love my friend You find it doesn*t pay, Although it causes broken hearts It happens everyday. You wonder where he is at night And wonder is he*s true, One minute your happy And the next you are cold and blue. Written with love Sealed with a kiss If you love me dearly you*ll answer this Of all the guys i*ve ever met, You*re the one i can*t forget. Don*t you know that god above, Has granted you for me to love. Your lips are lined like pots of gold, Hard to get and hard to hold. God had picked you from the rest, Because he knew i*d love you best. In all my dreams bur lips have met, Just you wait i*ll get you yet. I had a heart it was so true, But now it*s gone from me to you. Take care of it as i have done, Cause you have 2 and i have none. If i get to heaven and your not there I*ll write your name on the golden stairs. I*ll give the angels back their wings, Golden hair and everything. I love you and i think your grand, We*ll go to the moves and you*ll hold me hand. If your smiling while reading this, You*ll be granted one big kiss. p.s.- kisses are thrown, and kisses are wasted but kisses aren*t good unless their tasted. Darling i love you dearest the same, Pardon me honey i can*t sign my name <3 always ? THATS ALL I GOT, I HOPE YOU LIKE EM' This post has been edited by babi_gurl08: Feb 17 2005, 03:49 PM |
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Apr 2 2005, 02:15 AM
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Freshman ![]() Group: Member Posts: 94 Joined: 25-September 04 From: tennessee Member No.: 66232 Name: Shannon Gender: Female |
QUOTE (xonicole26 @ Nov 29 2004, 05:51 PM) finding my own words, my own little stage my own epic drama, my own scripted page i'll send you the rough draft, i'll seal it with tears maybe you'll read it and i'll reappear from the start it was shaky and the characters rash, a nice setting for heart ache where emotions come last all i have deep inside to overcome this desire are friendly intentions and fairweather smiles you didnt write that... its from a song called rough draft by yellowcard |
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